All Comments on 'Justin'

Weird. Sorry I wasted the time to skim through. If this is what all of your stories will be like don't plan on high scores, stories like this are a dime a dozen. Most of them better.

Looking forward to your adventures.

Congratulations on your first story. I can’t wait to read about your experiences.

Great debut - looking forward to reading more of your tales

Until the end it was pretty pedestrian - but the ending!!! That raises it to a five, because yes - I loved it!!

Wow! SoCalAshley takes us back to our youth with anxious thoughts of high school, prom, and first touches. It is both heartfelt and extremely erotic. She captures those memories perfectly in a story that flows innocently and sensuously.

I enjoyed this story, the way it was written and the twist at the end is different from what you're usually going to read here. Bravo.

Good story. I liked the plot twist at the end. I hope you will continue to write about your experiences.

Nice first-time story. Ignore the one bad comment. I think you are a very good writer.

Very nice story and as another has stated a great plot twist to end! This took me back to my first experience and the thrill of sharing it with someone you really liked. Like you i was a senior in HS so the story was very poignant for me.

I really like your writing style! Keep up the great work.

Horatio

Very well written

Nice twist at the end. Good start