All Comments on 'Justin Thyme Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please

Please hurry with the 3rd chapter..I'm so into this story and can't wait to see where it goes now..great story keep it up..

johnnywjrjohnnywjrover 10 years ago
More please.

I'm enjoying the tease. Please keep going.

Mr_OutdoorsMr_Outdoorsover 10 years ago

This is a fantastic story, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well done

Great chapter again. I hope this will be a long series, I think it has the potential for it. Please do keep on writing this but I'd personally prefer if the chapters were a bit longer as it's easier to get in to the story.

1 10 page story is 10 times better than 10 1 page stories :) Still, 5 stars again.

Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 10 years ago
This chapter

Is too short, there's almost no advancing in the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

When will ch.3 be here?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome!

The story is advancing just fine, thank you! (Contrary to a below poster who seems to be in a rush) I love the slow character build up with enough substance to get me hard or 'rub one out', (never heard that expression before this site, wonder what country it was native to?) I'm in no rush for anyone to get laid, believe it or not! Its not very often on here we get a GooD multi chapter story that keeps our interest without constant repetitive sex. Thanks for fun content!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Kudos !

You really do know how to " tease " with a story line, and " rub one out " originated in England, long ago.

ausvirgoausvirgoalmost 2 years ago

Really loving this story - I've read it before, but long enough ago that a lot of it's fresh again.

It's rather obvious that Justin's inexperienced, though. Instead of struggling to keep his boxers on he should have been removing Susie's teeshirt - Why Susie's? Because she was the one most likely to let him succeed, or at least get a flash of boobs or puss, and maybe a feel of he naked bum, and the sexual dynamics were such that both she and Justin were naked Rosemary wouldn't have been far behind and even Steph would probably have been topless. Steph would probably have still called a stop "before we do something we would be sorry about later", but would have been motivated to give Justin a private showing in the near future.

ausvirgoausvirgoalmost 2 years ago

I agree with anonymous that "The story is advancing just fine, thank you! (Contrary to a below poster who seems to be in a rush)". A good buildup and suspense is way more erotic than just a "fuck description".

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