All Comments on 'Kaitlyn's Sister in Vegas'

Please use the correct word.

It is shudder, not shutter. But who cares when you write a story this hot? Look, I prefer good grammar too, but as long as it is not some lame ass stroke story that is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, then I overlook them. And this was a well done story. Now, if he can just entice the sisters to get it on with each other...that is, if they haven't already, and just weren't prepared to tell him. I shudder to think what may happen when they no longer shutter that from him.

Jedd

I was appalled when I saw that I typed the wrong word (shuttered vs shuddered). I try to be very careful about using proper grammar, correct punctuation and correct spelling. Thanks for pointing out my error - I have submitted an updated version to correct it.

I really liked this story A lot,,except ,,to me ,,I wished he would have taken longer to push inside of her and would have liked her reaction when he broke her cherry, but thats just me. Would love for you to continue the story, I actually got wet reading it.

It’s so ironic that all of the grammar experts have never written a story or they sign anonymously.

I really like how you end your stories with “….”

I luv redheads so this story hit a solid chord with me. A delightful, thoughtful and erotic story. Thanks for writing it.