All Comments on 'Kansas'

Excellent, sexy and so well written. I shall now read your other stories

You have GOT to get these two together again! Please don't make this a one-night stand. This is the way good erotica should be, well-written, affecting, and still HOT! Looking forward to reading your other stories, and I do hope Brett and Ana somehow find each other again.

A great well-written story and I loved your characters. Please write a sequel...

janiexx

this was a fun read! While I was living there though, I don't remember having an experience like this (poor me!)

This is the only story I know of that mentions Wichita other than my story "The Bell Ringer".

Nicely done - good read!

DJ

All i can say is that you must keep this story going...

Excellent, truly excellent. But I disagree with some of the comments. Yes, a sequel would be appreciated. But who among us has not experienced moments, though not at intense, that left us wondering, "What if?" Leaving this story as the totality of their relationship makes it more meaningful than the few moments of pleasure that a sequel might provide. Keep writing!

The late Willard Garvey would have loved this!

You know its the land of AHHHH's.....

Please, please, please write a sequel.

That was such a romantic, thrilling story! I loved every part it seemed to wrap me in with all the emotion... Terrific...

What a beautiful story! I hope we see these characters again! Thank you. :)

it was great, please write more!

I wrote in response to your recent story, that I preferred stories that were more explicit.

I guess that you're Irish. Do you also have red hair.

It's not just that you write great stories, your writing is quite refined. You know how to evoke desire.

Great work.

Dan

this was amazing, turned me on like no other. keep writing, you're fantastic!

This story is so amazingly detailed. Absolutely fabulous. All I can say is Thank You for writing it. Every woman wants what she had, even for one night. And you nailed it perfectly.

Very intense, excellently written. Thank you! I've been away from Literotica for too many years, but I plan to add my own stories, soon. Again, thank you!