All Comments on 'Karaoke Nights'

Quite a night I must say. Sexy as can be, yet the boyfriend might not realize that he's just handed his beloved girlfriend over to Karen, and may well lose her in the bargain.

"Here's hoping then , that this would not be the last but, with a little help from my friends, be just the beginning of H's adventure, and possibly new way of life"

Yeah, a new way of life as Karen's slave seems the most likely outcome.

I found this to be quite a bore. Frankly, I finished it simply so I could leave a comment. Droll humiliation and not a single hint of sensuality. You spent more time setting up the point system in your karaoke nightmare; whereas you should have been stoking the lame embers of sexuality. Mundane. You obviously have some intelligence...put it to use.

... if you don't write it's sequel. I have to agree with an other reader that so far you have put more emphase on your point system than on the sexuality in your story. The subject is interesting, your writing style is excellent, but I can only take it as an introduction to a very well structured story. Keep up the good work and be back very soon I hope with many more chapters to this wonderful saga.

You're a good writer, and it's a nice concept, but making H be the only one that lost anything felt extremely contrived, and it got very stale, very quickly. You really could've put a little more effort into the story. And the reference to The Story of O didn't really add anything.

You really need to do a follow up on this one

He knows this girl will not do well and sets her up then more or less by seduction induces her to continue. Then allows photos to be taken of her nude while she is drunk. What really needed to happen is that she go to the police and file charges on all of them for getting her drunk then sexual harassment. The photos to be used to get her to do the sexual acts are attempts at blackmail. She really needs to have some relatives go visit the exboyfriend and provide him with a few reminders about manners around women by a few heavy booted kicks to the gonads. He and his "friends" weren't having fun they were by choice sexually exploiting a younger girl. Removing all six of them from the gene pool would not be a loss. This isnt erotic it is emotional blackmail and a setup.

asshole right. Wont it be cute when H turns up with a handgun and eliminates karen and the boyfriend from life?

If not that's their maturity level!

Clearly, the lightweights don't like this story, but for the genre this is hardly as bad as they say. Some of these 15 year olds can't comprehend the line between fantasy and reality.

When this is your fetish, a story like this is practically tame compared to some. I wish you would write more. Sure, it's a little long on exposition but it's overall well put together.

there are 96 Forfeits to perform and read about so I hope You will carry on with this great story (or someone if you`ve given up)aZKZ6q1