All Comments on 'Karen in the Closet'

that was hella hot can't wait to see what happens next

This was good ,looking forward to what mom can do.

This is definitely going to be one of the hotter incest stories.Let's have more and soon!

Wow, I'm looking forward to reading part 2 thanks

we want more, we want more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a super HOT story this is... I just can't wait for part 2, and hopefully part 3.. Keep up the good work, my cock loves it.

What a terrific HOT story with all the ingredients for a supercharged next chapter. Well done.

Great story. Can't wait for for the next part(s). Thank you for writing.

It's been a while since I've read a story this refreshing, this enjoyable, and this hot. It may be somewhat formulaic, but the execution was wonderful. For a first-time post in this community, you deserve a virtual pat on the back. Very strong indeed. =)<br><br>

I do indeed hope you continue, as the ending logically points to a follow-up, or several. My only advice is to perhaps take it a bit slower. The action was great, but I found myself wishing there was more of it. Even going so far as to adding a few extra paragraphs can go a long way (for instance, the expression on the daughter's face whilst she was doing the deed, etc.). <br><br>

Great job, and keep up the good work. <br><br>

-jm

A great prelude to what could be a classic series. Keep up the good work!

I bet more than moms face was red,you are not talking from personal experience are you.Just you wait for the moment his quivering manhood penetrates his mother and sister as they are having a Tribadic orgasm,lucky swine

YOUR STORY HIT HOME,I HAD SEX WITH MY SISTER WHEN WE WERE YOUNGER! I LOVED YOUR STORY,I HOPE THERE ARE MORE!! OPENPLAY996@AOL.COM

Please hurry with the next installment. If this is your first go then heaven help us !

monster dickey---God, how boring.

Please write more. Was very refreshing

First class submission,you are not new to incest,are you did you enjoy it?

I can't wait to read the next submission. Great story and very erotic.

I am really looking forward to the next installment. Please don't keep us in suspense too long.

Excellent story and sexy ideas.

I thought this was a wonderfully sexy and hot story! Cannot wait to see what happens next!

What a naughty mom,were her nipples sticking out like chapel hat pegs? Part two please.

This boy is suffering from a serious complaint called elephantitist,it seems that many do in stories on Literotica,apart from that this is a very erotic story.Somehow shrink his dick down to about 7-8 inches then go on.Our aim is to pleasure women ,not do them permanent internal damage.

Is Mathew really a dwarf with a normal sized dick?That would reach to his nipples.I tried to do what he apparently can do ,terrible sciatica.

i was hoping she wouldnt be caught and could develop something with each individually. good story

please asap!!! loved it

"Not bad for a 39 year old mother of two," she thought, admiring her trim figure in the mirror.

Why must this exact sentence has to be in every damned story?

Nice 1st post. Give us more.

Hey ... nicely done! I enjoyed it immensely. Don't pay any attention to the nay-sayers ... I loved the theme of the mesmerized mom and sister. It gives power to men that they really don't have. In real life, men are mesmerized by women's breasts and nipples ... so this is GREAT fantasy!

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I can't wait till the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting too long.

Curious Caitlan? Curious about what? The taste of your childrens sex organs? What your son would feel like pushing that huge cock into his loving mothers pussy? Curious about how your sweet daughter would react to her loving mother needing to taste her virginal pussy? A nice accident of being trapped in his closet. I'm a bit surprised you still had your panties on after watching your children. You write nicely, just need a bit more length so I can manage to shoot my load while I jack off. Write more and let me know how you three enjoy each other.

it would be greta if the next chapter started from where this ended...perhaps the son and daughter escort the flustered mother to his bed.the sister takes the lead and takes of her mothers panties.then the brother is encouraged to fuck his mom.

God job, only problem is you'e left me hanging. Want to read more and see this family adventure unfold.

I would love to see more in this series, that story was hot. I loved it.

Will you continue this story???

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY....PLEEEASE!!!

Please continue the story!!! More self sucking! Please!!:)

Continue please. time to fuck mom.

i have n 8inch penis and my mom seen me once but she wasnt all sex crazed and cock hungry......she later said i had a very big penis for a 16yo and that her best friend seen it a few months ago and she was babysitting me and my younger brother 4 the night.......i fucked kellys tight little pussy so hard she creamed 4 the first time.....it was my first time n kelly told on me 4 makn her say i could fuck her sexy 18yo neice.....lol....point is ur a bit ova freak n o bet i could fuck u so hard youd tel me i could do anything i wanted coz u love the big cock!! Il email u a pic if u want ya milf.

Loved your story...looking forward for more...brings past and current times...very refreshing

That the series was never continued... :-(

more more more.Gotta have Karen enjoying the family life

I hope you have the next chapter on its way. You have a great story line keep it going.

I just came across this wonderful, erotic story! Please tell me it DOES continue?!

More please.

Good story, would like to read the next chapter.

that was hot and had the potential to be mind blowing and yet all these years later no chapter 2

I'll be looking for the next chapter on this one!

To the people saying they can't wait for a sequel...it's been 11 years since this story was posted...I think it's safe to say there won't be another chapter lol

This needs to be continued by some one please,

Was enjoying immensely until I realised there was only a part one

Noooooooooooo

Regards

The boy from OZ

Downunder to you northerners

Love mothers behaving badly! Love your work.

damn no chapter 2

That is a very good story. Please write more!

Any story with the word snatch or cunt I vote 1 star. I mean how old are we ?

It's so big...

It's bigger than his dad's.....

All girls are mesmerized by a boy's exposed dick.....

Well, actually only in poorly written sex stories but NOT in reality....

1 star from me.