All Comments on 'Karina Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
great

Could use more buildup and description in erotic scenes but I like where the story is going so far

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Hope to read more of this story soon.

PaladinInBlackPaladinInBlackover 7 years agoAuthor
Hope you like Part 2. Submitted and waiting for approval.

Thanks!

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I like to write, but I'm better at starting stories than at finishing them, so I have a rather large pile of unfinished stuff spring around. Most of my stuff is 'happily ever after'. You've been warned. FYI: I have posted a lot of this under a similar name (without the 'InBla...

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