All Comments on 'Karl Cared Enough'

thank you for this wonderful story

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This may be the best story I've ever read on Literotica. - D.C. Roi

And for the most part, beautifully written. But. You need to take more care about where you put the 'quotes'. And you don't need them to signify internal thinking. Just spoils the flow of an otherwise lovely story.

This has been one of the best Stories that I have read on Literotica. The emotions you have so skilfully depicted for Rhylee and Karl, and the background presence of the loving 'Spirit' of Karls' deceased wife. The two main characters are finally brought together to experience 'making love' in its most beautiful form; becoming the catalyst that strengthens Karl and Rhylee to begin a new life, and go their separate ways, into their own individual generations.

My thanks to the Author for an incredibly Beautiful Story.

This is with out a doubt, one of the most beautiful stories that I've read on literotica, keep on writing.

You are so mean... I want a man like Karl... This was a sweet ass tale and I'm being a total girl right now, but it was wonderful...

BRAVO !!! One of the best and most interesting stories I have ever read on Literotica. The continuity and real feelings developed with the two main characters made this story a really CLASS ACT. If there is a Story Award from Literotica, this should definitely win "Best Of ..... "

this is indeed the best I have read here, the gentleness of the soul of this kind man shown through to release what will probably be someones true goddess.....

You are a beautiful writer. Please keep writing — don't continue this one, it's done — even if it takes a while.

What a wonderful story. You have managed to make a tear come and not many writers can do that. Thank you for this story please do write some more.

What i liked:

i loved the basic story line. Gentle old man heals broken girl and is healed in return, guided by the memmory (possibly ghost) of his dead wife. actually got choked up a little in a few parts. it was poignant enough to over look a few grammer and spelling errors.

now, what i didn't like:

First, using your nursing infant in an attept to provoke a sexual responce is just creepy to me. Second, if some one pushed half chewed food in my mouth the only thing they are getting in return is vomit.

I too loved this story. The descriptions of the sexual encounters were just hot enough, the humor was real, and the tender feelings he had for his wife and this young girl were wonderful. I don't know how old you are, but you have captured the feelings of one whose body is aging and less than stellar, but the fires are still burning and the desire to love is still there. She was able to look past the apeearance, to the soul inside. Great job. I love the addition of the nursing details. Turns me on everytime!

But why did it have to end?

It was a good story, a bit cliche at times but still made for some wonderful reading. I especially liked the candle information. I don't know if that really works but I am going to tell me partner to pick up some ASAP! LOL

i cant believe you! you promised you'd never tell! fiction my ass!

I can't believe I was 'moved' by a story I read at Literortica; this is something I didn't ever expect. Good show. Cheers, MKM

Truly great! Thank you!

As I write this I am losing my wife to cancer. Been married 36 years -- she was and is my first love forever.

Thank you for the story. I'll remember it always.

Although I am only four years older than my wife, (We have been married 38 years now) She too had never been Loved, Fucked...Yes, but like your story, never LOVED. I was lucky enough to be the first to love her and it was the best thing that ever happened to me, as she has returned that love a million times over.

Thank You

It's a privilege to add my own voice to the accolades you've received for your masterful story telling. This is one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on LIT. Congratulations and thanks for sharing this lovely and superbly erotic story. Kal

your story reduced me to tears. firstly for her pain and his, then more tears for the joy and happiness, the beauty.

you write so beautifully thank you.

Definitely one of the best and balanced stories I've read. you took it to it's logical conclusion smoothly.

I can't add anything of substance to what's already been written, but I can say this is the best story I've read on Lit. You have created two characters that most of us who've read this story will never forget, and we have learned what it means to be fucked and what it means to be made love to or made love with. Making love is giving and taking and finally sharing the most wonderful act in which a human can partake.

Thank you!

This how love should be...

All I can say is that you deserve all the compliments the other readers have stated and many more. Amen.

I just want to thank all you who were kind enough to post comments on my story. It is amazingly gratifying to read your kind thoughts. I wrote the story to satisfy something in myself, and that it satisfied others means more to me than I expected. This is my second story, and I hope it isn't my last, but I can't force them out, they just kind of flow of their own accord and power.

Peace and blessings to my readers, and keep on commenting, it's amazing how important it is to the writer.

I am not sure how I ended up at this story, but I am so glad I read it. It is stunning in its beauty and a wonderful read.

Such a great story! Wish they had married.

You did such a good job on the story. A great balance between emotion, sex, making love, maturity, taking a moment for what it was and not belaboring it. I'm so glad I ran across this.

Plainshoneybadger

I actually read it a long time ago. When you commented on mine, your name seemed familiar, so I looked... and I remember this distinctly!

I liked it when I first read it, but I didn't have a Literotica account then.

I love your storytelling. It is superb.

Fantastic story concept, written with great understanding. Loved it, including the Kim/Margaret insert - excellent.

wyvernwand

Lierotica author

Great story. Might I add that you could do a sequel one with Karl falling in love with and marrying Kim and both Karl and Kim "adopting" Rhylee as their daughter and being loving grandparents to Kayden. Can't wait to read it again. Then another sequel of Rhylee getting married with more children.

Thank you for the story, you hit home on so many points. I loved it!

Wonderful story!

Like a diver being drawn down, to observe true wonders of the world in it's depths, then surfacing to the brilliance of everything around us! Thanks for the great journey and awakening.

for me, the best part was Karl describing to Rhylee his experiences with Margaret. He truly was teaching her about loving.