All Comments on 'Kate and I Ch. 16-18'

Keep up the good work and don't leave me hanging...lol

5 Stars

one of them needs to step up before the other is gone

You need to write more then one page at a time. It's to short of a read. Also you need to stop using military time 0100 and such. Just use regular time ie 1 pm or 1 o'clock. Other then those few things it a good story.

Story is going good but I find quite a few gramatic or is it typographical errors coming quite often?