All Comments on 'Kate and Jake Ch. 16'

What can I say to this superb performance? I enjoyed it from the first letter to the last, the emotions conveyed almost made me cry of happiness, the love was palpable and Maddys description at the end was spot on. No wonder they work so well together.

One minor thing I would like to see is a bit more detail in scenes between Jake & Cassie. Now that they are back together I was hoping for more detail on her physique, their approach to lovemaking and their joint reaction thereafter. Since they plan to be together for a long time it's inevitable to see them going at it more often so please include more detail and do spare maybe a chapter for them alone, they are a romantically couple after all :)

Another awesome installment in the series.

more chapters to where jake get all 3 pregnant at the same time

O can't wait for the next chapter. I would like to see Maddy give up her hang up on what's a proper relationship though. An admit jakes the one . An it looks like Kat already is realized this as well. Either way tour doing a great job keep it up

I've really tried to get into this series, but there honestly is way too much talking and dialogue for my tastes!

This is a great series. Loved the build up and interaction with the characters.

I only wish and would give everything I have.