All Comments on 'Kate & Natalie'

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a great start to what could be a great series. You should continue writing more of this story.

You must have given up on LW stories because they were so stupid..GIVE UP..........period

If you write on this site, try writing in English rather than the crappy gobbledegook you put on the page. It's a pain in the arse to keep reading almost every sentence more than once in an attempt to understand what you are trying to say, and frankly I gave up trying after less than half your story. However, I don't mean to be totally negative, and I give you some points for the fact that you actually tried - which most of us don't. Get an educated editor. You might very well learn something, and your writing would be more acceptable. Freddy

It was hard to read and the story could have used more of a set up to know what was going on. An editor is always a wise choice for writers who don't know how to proof read a story or not sure of proper spelling and punctuation. Give it another try and see what more time an effort will bring about. Lance

Just incompetent writing.