All Comments on 'Kate: Breaking in a Virgin'

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Flyer2Flyer2almost 8 years ago
Nice

Really enjoyed the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story

Really good story. I love your writing

sparktjsparktjalmost 8 years ago
Superb story

Excellent writing, your story got me very aroused. Loved the whole scenario, very authentic, and the dynamic among the 3 main characters was described perfectly. I also loved the little details, for example how you described Kate's sexual response, and the sounds of their noisy copulating being heard by Ben. Hugely erotic.

Please write more. You Aussies write some great erotica, it must be something in the water out there! As a Brit, I find it similar in style to ours ... guess it's something to do with our shared history and the Commonwealth. Thanks again.

artykay63artykay63almost 8 years ago
great writing

Thanks, well written, erotic, believable. What's not too like?

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 5 years ago
I LIKE IT, I LOVE IT, I WANT SOME MORE OF IT!!

I'm hooked. Truly love your writing...story after story!

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I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...