by BadWriter69
Wow! This is one the best series I have read in Literotica.
I am waiting with bated breath for the next episode.
Please, please continue.
I urge you to find a literate friend to correct your grammar.
no real background or character development just a rushed middle with no sex and no end. you wasted your time, our time and the sites space eother delete all your partial stories or finish them half a story is worse than no story at all and this was much less than half.
you submitted these 2 chapters,then 3 years later it was a different story,please finish this story and ASAP