by qhml1
interest me, but, your style and command of the language is compelling.
Write on.
What is this fascination you have with death?
In "Before I forget" you did an amazing job with the death scene. This one left out the actual point of passing, but touched that emotional loss.
Other than the quick passage of time for death till fuck, I don't have a problem with it, except that it denies the true sense of loss a long-time partner would go through, even after an extended "sick" spell. I can talk myself either way, but it might be something to rekindle in future sequences.
great story so far
Thanks
Seems stand-alone...until the end.
My favorite aspect is their mature, relaxed civility.
A lovely believable story, true friends are hard to come by, this showed what a value we should all place in them. I will read more by this wonderful author.
I need a list of the Hoage stories!!! I have been reading from the top down. I have the feeling that's the wrong order...
List of stories
1 - The creation of Shanna
2- Mrs Montrose
3- Mrs Montrose in Antwerp
4- Kathryn
5- The Hogue Dossier
6- Dr Parker
Death is a mighty powerful experience and when someone passes, you are never quite the same afterwards. People who stay behind have both lost the physical portion of the departed but they have also gained memories that will last forever and that connect everyone in the universe.
5*
BJ
"Part five will be either in Non Erotic or Incest, I haven't decided. "
Part Five??
When???