All Comments on 'Kathy's Diner'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Yeah!

Loved it!

Thank you!!!!

Brit Girl xx

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12almost 15 years ago
hot!

hot little story! love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Take it off!

Your characters spend so much time rubbing and dry fucking that the action becomes unbelievable. Do you have a jeans fetish? Give them something else to wear. (A skirt for the woman would be hotter than fuck; her cunt's only panties away.)

You have some good ideas but really don't understand what turns people on.

Good luck.

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