All Comments on 'Kathy's Pool Party Ch. 01: Jen'

Not that I'd blame them... but actually, I'd asked them to rename "Jen at the Pool Party Ch. 01," because the new name would fit in better with the follow-up story (or stories). Instead, the story ended up online twice, with two names.

Nobody will blame you if you give high ratings to both of them. Just saying. It would be funny if the two versions of the same story end up with wildly different numbers.

If you're a writer here, you know this already: if you like a series, or even if you think a series has good potential, high ratings are the encouragement for a writer to continue. It's not as if there's money or fame in this, after all: just the satisfaction of having our work acknowledged and appreciated.

Looking forward to the follow-up almost as much as Davy was looking forward to popping Jen's cherry.

I really got into Jen's story only to have it end and her run away. I figured you'd pick it up again, but now it a couple of months and two more chapters later and nothing. I hope you'll rectify this soon. Thanks