All Comments on 'Kathy's Pool Party Ch. 02 - Berni'

If you're doing what I think you're doing here, how about Didi's story next? Just don't make it that she's a virgin too.

wait what happened with jen? you should totally continue this, i can't wait to see what happens next

My thoughts exactly what happened to Jen? Wasn't the story about her in the beginning?

You posted the first story twice under different names and now you leave out the girl the story was about?

The first story is here under two names because I'd only meant to change the title (so it would fit in with the upcoming chapters), and Literotica left both versions in place instead.

As far as Jen's story goes... it's not over. Everybody's stories are connected here, and she'll reappear -- maybe in Davy's story, but that might be too obvious.

The third chapter was uploaded a few days ago, and should appear any minute now.