All Comments on 'Katie'

Great story. I hope there’s a chapter 3

Pretty much an account of a first time screwing and with little to no ‘story’ behind it. Kinda boring. Sorry.

Spoiled by the crap about condoms and pills this is story land

Well told, erotic and brief. It is truly great to find a writer who doesn't squander words for no real purpose.

I gave it a well deserved 5 stars.

Agree with first anon: not much there. Well written but would really have liked some tension or some keep my attention.

Only 2 stories???? You are a great writer. I want more. Thanks