All Comments on 'Katie and John Ch. 02'

the first chapter was so-so but this chapter blew chuncks it was so bad why would he want to watch his father play with her and why would he want anything to do with her after he found out what she was up to he would avoid and ignore her keep it realistic and believable or put it in the fantacy area

this is pretty good...keep going.

i really like this story.please add more