by KatieNylonLegs
Only a couple of minor errors - I've seen a lot worse here! Good story lead-in. Looking forward to more.
Wow love the story line and where this is heading. Hope you write more. Don’t worry about and errors there are way worse writers out here and if someone criticizes you then they are here for wrong reason. Please write more.
Omg yes!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read chapter 2! I need to know if they go to same school and what comes about!