All Comments on 'Katie's Eden'

OhMissScarlett, you have simply outdone yourself with this story! Very well written and highly erotic. Although, I am definitely a heterosexual male, I am not afraid to admit my attraction to a little anal play now and again. However, mine has just been limited to tongues and the occaisional finger. I feel a carrot to be a little much for my personal tastes. Nevertheless, I loved this story so much I gave it a five.

What a title and useful for what was done. It is very erotic when lovers can do each other sexually. It heats up the action, because of the location where this took place.

You're the greatest writer of vegetable-anal-penetration porn in the known universe. Superb job.

I love this story down to every last detail. Perv. :D

or an ear of corn. Can i come work for you too? Awesome story and written with a flare that most only hope to emmulate.

Brava!

I'll never look at vegetables the same way again. Wonderful story Miss S.

takes on a whole new meaning now.

Fantastic, fun, frollicksome, fucking story. Well done.

Mat

Wow, great scene. Thanks foe sharing it, Carson reccomended it, and I Am not disapppointed that I took his advise.

It's good and good for you. Nice piece of work. A nicely drawn protag who I kept visualizing as looking like Reba McEntire, which is a good thing. Makes me glad I fussed at you to get it finished.

Well written, very erotic, wonderful stuff

He got all the breaks! A beautiful woman and paid to please her! What could be better then this? Not much! Keep them cumin and I will be UP for allot more!

Liked this a lot, nice balance of story and sex.

Passionate, hot and sexy and I loved the traces of real humour insrted into the hot sex play. Brilliant!

And to think I never liked corn before! Good dialogue, too.

I don't think I've ever met a protag with quite Katie's appealing mix of down to earth and kinkster. The dialogue, external and internal, was excellent! Very well done! I'm impressed. :)

Loved the anal scene :) You write good sex, with, or without vegetables.

Great story.... I used to hate veggies... but that's almost enough to make me consider eating em all up!!

Now I know why I love vegetables. :D Hot, hot, hot! Good luck!

Just loved it. Really great piece of writing. Katie is sexy and funny - and you got real mud for Earth Day!

When do they get to the marrow patch?

Wow...I enjoyed this one...wow...

~Honey

Had to see what was going to beat me out for the category in March, and I was happy to see that it was a funny and well written story such as this. Congratulations on a wonderful piece of work.

In a story that was very hot overall. I like the playful start to their scene, the mischieviousness with the hose. It just got better as it continued. I can see how the texture of an ear of corn could be stimulating. Very original and great work. And I loved this..."My selection of men is limited to divorced guys I went to high school with or married guys I went to high school with." Wonderful line.

Sexy and playful and hot. ~Imp

Positively delicious.

Well-written and very sexy.

sweetsubsarahh

Wow. I've never even commented on a story before but that one was off the charts. Good work.

That was great. Very well written and very hot. I was glad she got it on with that Swiss professor, I was afraid she was going to settle for sex with the ex. That carrot scene was great. I need to try something like that at home.

Loved the earthy texture to this story and the graphic anal sex was the cherry on the cake - a winner ...

You dirty girl, Scarlett. Very, very bad, but good.

Fun story, good character descriptions and achieved a rise in the 'ol levis. hmmmm carrot scene, oh my.

Wow, that was so sexy! The outdoor anal-anal combo was so hot - I used to work on an organic farm and I would have loved to have that happen to me. Great job!

This story is fucking amazing! It is no wonder you were one of the winners!

Just...

WOW!

Now I'm off to find "Jake." ;-)

I'm going vegetable shopping tomorrow... :)

This story is so hot, and so sweet. Keep it coming!

I'll be back to read this again.

Excellent writing. The mouth, cunt, and ass in the tale are appealing but the brain that crafted the story is the sexiest thing of all. Kudos!

Great writing...so unusual here!

Hello Miss Scarlett,

I really enjoyed that,I'm about to see if you have more stories for me!

Regards,

Lindsay.

About half way through I became conscious of the writing, setting the scene, making character, creating a time and place - not just a scene - and sat up (didn't stop enjoying :) to read more attentively. Wonderful work, wonderfully literate. Well observed and beautifully written. Now I will pass this along to several friends, which I have never done before with erotica. And not just because I have a vegetable medley fetish, but because this is really a great story. (Markerem@hotmail.com)

I need more of this. So beautiful, not to mention well written. Continuation!!!

Miss Scarlett, this is awesome writing!!! The story's great too! Keep on truckin', puhleese!

My favorite combo...really enjoyed it.

Would like to read more...

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I absolutely love it. I love how women take their time with every little detail. Men tend to rush directly into the sex and it's big dick this, big dick that over and over again. You mame, are witty, sexy, and perfect with the build up pace. Keep it up girl!

Loved both the sex and the humor. Thanks.

Very entertaining. Creativ language use and a catching atmosphere. Congratulations!

very hot...

love it...

ok, as far as i can remember...

a womans asshole is the best place for my cock