All Comments on 'Katie's Journey Ch. 04'

im going to take a shot in the dark and say his wife had this done too him.and she got paid for it.

I think you are partially right. The wife is somehow responsible. I have a feeling the wife is connected to the company. Either owner, employee, or relative of someone with the company. This is not the kid of company you would find on the internet or the "yellow pages".

Although I am enjoying the story, I must agree that I find the short chapters annoying. I like to read for more than five minutes at a time. Katie's unveiling should have been the start of chapter two. Or two should have started with the "why?". Either way would have worked. Now I have to wait for another scrap of story. Do you write it the same way?

Please continue. And longer chapters

Now s/he was a rapist? 2*.

I ask you not to stop please. I want to see her accept it and become slowly become a everyday girl. lol

I would love to see her learn to accept it and even embrace it. New panties dresses etc!!! Please write more

I recently found your story Katie's Journey, and found it quite intriguing to read. I liked it very much and think it's a shame it has paused mid-story. Please do consider picking it back up and finishing it?

With great admiration, a new fan.