All Comments on 'Kayla Comes Home Ch. 03'

I was really enjoying this story right up to where she fucked Devon for no appparent reason. Did you get bored with the romantic line this story was taking? Poor Trevor.

No more romance here. Just a selfish woman who can't control herself. You ruined what was a good story. I gave your other chapters 5 stars. I won't read the rest of your story. But good luck with your writing. Just not this one.

I think you should continue the series, but make the individual chapters a little longer. I cant wait to read more.