All Comments on 'Kayla's Massive Assets'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5 Crap is annony's son's name!!!

Annony's name is asshole. His dead wife is named cunt full of other men's cum!

TacocarnitasTacocarnitasalmost 7 years ago
This is great

Ridiculous and I love it. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Stops too short

Nice set up, although more description of their appearances wouldn't go amiss. Spelling is just atrocious and a real buzz kill. End too quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
5*

But think about an editor. Nothing major just a few things, for example look up the meaning of “site” vs “sight”.

Overall great job. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

O cup!! Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, atrocious grammar

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice subject matter, average story telling, cheap writing style, horrible grammar and spelling. The cheap and the horrible really take away the joy of an otherwise entertaining story.

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