by The_Ride
Annony's name is asshole. His dead wife is named cunt full of other men's cum!
Nice set up, although more description of their appearances wouldn't go amiss. Spelling is just atrocious and a real buzz kill. End too quickly.
But think about an editor. Nothing major just a few things, for example look up the meaning of “site” vs “sight”.
Overall great job. Keep them coming.
Nice subject matter, average story telling, cheap writing style, horrible grammar and spelling. The cheap and the horrible really take away the joy of an otherwise entertaining story.