All Comments on 'Kay's Work Trip (Day 01)'

This story had a lot of potential. However any potential this story had, was lost in the poor grammar and the lax writing style, (e.g., "Anyway, Craig (who fancies me)..."). If you are going to add more chapters to this story then I would suggest spending sometime editing and work on improving your writing style.

And, I didn't think that was possible.

so you are from brissie?

Got my hand pumping my cock very nicely!

That Kay drove off the cliff and we won't hear anymore of these ridiculous, implausible stories ever again.

what a wonderful hubby. Looking forward to the next three episodes! My bosses never do anythig this exciting when we travel together, lol.

I liked the setup of the scene and how the husband would be electric with excitement wondering what was happening. It's just a shame it wasn't a little longer and the other bosses didn't make an appearance. Maybe next chapter?

Another story about a whore wife and her cuck. Not an original one either.

If she was aware her husband not being home was related to her impending divorce and law suit against her former employers?

Good lord kid you have severe repression issues. Im mean 4 stories and all gay shit. WTF dude? You live in odoreaters sleeping bag with him?

Bet you made someone a nice little wife by this point in time. We know you still havent even kissed a girl. Hell you probably never even looked their way.