All Comments on 'Keep the Sheets Clean'

Good start but doesn't feel like the story is over. Keep going, you've got a great set up just need to keep going.

A very sexy story, short and hot.

It does have some minor spelling/ grammar problems but none that are a massive distraction from the story.

With BDSM it’s always better to be careful so the commentary near the end is too ambiguous where she’s thinking: “my safe word is our safe word but I won’t use it”, that it’s a dangerous precedent to set.

I prefer to read it/ imagine it in the context of: (A) “I’m nowhere near close to thinking about using my safe word” instead of the other option which is deeply disturbing. Namely; (B) “I must not disappoint him I won’t ever use my safe word!”.

I know my comment could be read as picking fault but it was offered with good intent.

Thanks for sharing, I agree entirely with the other comment, I’d love to read more about these two.

Tess (uk)