All Comments on 'Keeper Ch. 04'

by Ardella

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MaynessMaynessover 11 years ago
Good chapter

Love how the plot is thickening, really good read. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oh, I loved it!

More, please.

I hope the next chapter will be coming, soon???

I like the parallel story with Dimitry. Maybe we will hear about Udre and Minou.

Great job.

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 11 years ago
smiles

very happy to read more of their developing relationship. Very interesting man isn't he?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
love your writing Ardella!

I too am dying to hear just a few scraps of info Udre & Minou again. But I do like Dimitri also. I reread the entire infiltration series while waiting for Keeper Ch 04!

EvaYvonneEvaYvonneover 11 years ago
Yup!

Keep it up baby! Loving it so far!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More more more!

Thanks for the fabulous story!

meh4912meh4912over 11 years ago
Where is Chapter 5?

I do love this story, and want more...is Chapter 5 coming soon?

ArdellaArdellaover 11 years agoAuthor
Re: Chapter 5

Coming asap (in fact I've got some done that I was going to wait until I had more before I submitted it, but now I'm thinking I'll just go ahead with it)... very sorry about the long delay... free time to write has become even more scarce than ever lately, but I give it a go whenever possible.

This brings me to a question, if anyone sees this and wants to put in their two cents:

Of course long chapters without waiting is ideal, but if it must be A) short chapters with shorter waits, or B) longer chapters but with more time in between, which would you prefer?

Just curious.

:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Long well written chapters are best

While it is hard to be patient between chapters, a long, well written chapter is far more satisfying than a short one that is rushed out. You spoiled us with the comparatively quick pace of Infiltration's chapter releases, but if the quality of Keeper is to your usual standards, then I can possess myself of a little patience. Keep up the very fine work and Thank You for publishing it here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I prefer shorter

The suspense kills me! I'd much rather have A: shorter chapters with shorter wait time. Shorter wait time won't mean rushed chapters. Love your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Chapter length

I love your stories, and got addicted to checking in regularly for The Infiltration. I keep checking back here to see if there are updates. So while I would LOVE longer chapters every day, I would also love to keep up with the story with less wait, even if that means shorter chapters.

Keep up the good work!

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 11 years ago
longer chapters

Much prefer longer chapters since you're taking votes.

Love your stories!

Cheers

ArdellaArdellaover 11 years agoAuthor
Re: Chapter length

Thanks to all who provided input.

Will certainly try to be quicker... AND have longer chapters. Ha.

Now, if only that pesky 'Time' thing would co-operate.

;)

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