All Comments on 'Keeping Close Ch. 01: The Party'

Very very nice beginning. I do so hope you will continue this, and as quickly as possible, as long as you can maintain this quality. Well written, extremely hot stories. The combinations could be endless 5*

Always a bad idea to switch between perspectives like this. No matter who you try to identify with as a reader, you end up feeling cuckolded. Beginner's mistake.

Could have worked if the set-up was something like Mara and Jenna had a pact that Mara would flirt with Robbie so Alex would open up for cousin incest, so Jenna could have him. Now it just fell flat. The set-up was that Alex didn't want his little sister defiled by his annoying cousin, and then that's exactly what happens. Wtf is that?

Good writing well set up, one minor thing is that you set up the girls (all good looking) set up the cousin (10 inch cock) but nothing about the main character except he was ripped. Please continue

Next chapter Nina and Jenna, The following chapter is the Aunts turn.

Keep up the good work.

good start