All Comments on 'Keeping Her in Line'

Very sexy, right up my alley. I like the way you used 1st and 2nd person...it really helped me imagine myself in on the action.

i don't normally comment on stories, but this is wonderfully written. your language is beautiful. descriptive without being crude is hard to do, but you manage to do it wonderfully. i love the way that you combined the first and second person tenses here. i hope that there's a second part to this story, because this was simply wonderful.

Absolutely perfect and very well written!