All Comments on 'Keeping it in the Family'

by thongcladtommi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Keep it going. This is a good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good work :) rushed a bit at the end, but good (Y)

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
I like the storyline and perhaps where it's headed.

If he is to take care of all of his Uncle's wives plus his Dad's wife plus his Grandpa's wife, he'll be a very busy boy.

Wouldn't it be just grand, when the men returned from their hunting and fishing trip, that all of the wives were pregnant.

Each woman would present a completely new problem for him to figure out as of how to seduce her. Of course Grandma would be ordered to help him in his seduction.

Now that would be kinky to read how Tom bred all of the women.

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good going

Good writing. Keep going....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
so-so

glad he never finished it because the way he was headed it would have been just another rushed story where all the husbands are killed and he has to take care of all the women. way to over done on this site writers keep using the same tired plot just changing the names and places no originality any more. if you can't come up with an original story then don't post anything.

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