by JJgreenville
Really great story! It was arousing as well as filed with detail. Nice Job!
Can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Vic Vitale
Just love you writing ... I was so hot reading it ... thinking about my lovely 24-year old granddaughter who I would love to get in that position ... just a fantasy, now.
Adding the dog pretty much ruined the story. That canine presence hung over the whole story, and put a pall on it all.
Could you always write a non-bestiality version of a story, and clearly label the bestiality versions as such, so we could avoid them.