All Comments on 'Keeping It In The Family'

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vicvitalevicvitaleabout 13 years ago
I loved it!

Really great story! It was arousing as well as filed with detail. Nice Job!

Can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Vic Vitale

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great Story!

Just love you writing ... I was so hot reading it ... thinking about my lovely 24-year old granddaughter who I would love to get in that position ... just a fantasy, now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep the goddamn dog out of it!!!!!! Yuck.

Adding the dog pretty much ruined the story. That canine presence hung over the whole story, and put a pall on it all.

Could you always write a non-bestiality version of a story, and clearly label the bestiality versions as such, so we could avoid them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Maxwell?

Wonderful grandparents, great storyline, more please.

Anonymous
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