All Comments on 'Keeping Our 18th Birthday Promise'

Love your very original plot. Hot n sexy and making babies. please keep going. I think you did very well for your first story.

I grew up on a farm.

I can relate to watching horses, cows, and pigs breeding.

Nice touch having their first times in the corral.

Good use of the cucumber with her bursting her hymen.

Please add a sequel to the farm.

Farm life…..the Next Generation

Great job. Hope sis shows a baby bump real soon.

Good writing. Keep going. Good proofreading.

Not a bad start to what I feel is a promising writing career. I was left a bit curious when the dad did not get into the daughter like the son did with the mother. The scene was clearly visible to the reader. A sequel would seem to be in order. Awaiting your next installment.

Very well thought out and written, especially if this is your first effort in publishing!

Excellent story. It's like you've been writing for a long time, keep writing.

I think based on the fact they were twins and had an unspoken bond there is some reality that can be had in this situation. I am not sure that a mom could be turned after 20 years to be sexually open but you know what I would of jumped at that situation. Hooray for being young and full of it.

Why do writer think every story as to have big tits and horse size cocks

Thank you for writing this story

You have a terrific imagination and I really enjoyed reading

And from your preamble I think this is fiction

Either way, please post more

My wife is 5'9" with 38D top and hips 34 and wears size 5 underwear. Your size 8 underwear may fit hips size 48 inches. This is VERY round and no interest to a normal male. Now my wife is an AMAZON and starts the bar fights. CHEERS

Totally fiction. It would have been better if you had just kept the sex strictly between the siblings. Parental approval is nice, but parental involvement ruined it. 1/5

look forward to seeing where else this goes

Delicious!!!

Thank You!!!

Like all to many - ignoring the genetic dangers of family induced pregnancy.

Hot, like the fact the Dad didn't fuck the daughter.

I swear I read this story several years ago. I don't know if this is the same author just republishing it or what.

And it really doesn't matter if it was previously published or now. It was a fun story when I read it originally and It's still a fun story now.

love to see sister pregnant at the end! 5 stars every time.