All Comments on 'Kelly Ch. 04'

Keep it going, if you can.

I was 20 in '73 - although in Hungary, and that was a lot different in those times, but you took me back to them. <sigh> ... :-)))

John

I was sitting here falling into the story and falling in love just like the main character. I felt like it was 1987 all over again and falling in love for the first time....it was just that vivid.

You have a way with words. I almost don't want this story to end......

This was excellent in it's entirety... masterfully done, especially in the heated scenes, which were vivid with perfect flow and amazing visuals. Very well described, you fully encaptured the moment without any unnecessary adjectives. Perfect. Thank you.

Romantic love stories are always the best, when done right. This is one of the best stories I've read.

If this is fantasy, then I hope the writer will one day have the pleasure of living it for real.

Written with such feeling. The best I have read in Literotica

I fell in love with her too. You write so well. It's a joy for me to read your stories. Keep it up!

Maybe I had a chance at that. What I got were two beautiful daughters, and a screwed marriage. Good endings are the best. Thank you.

Don't f*** it up.

DGG

Wow ... wow ... wow!!!

What an incredible story ... VERY well written ... really romantic as well as sexy ... great blend of items for a casual reader ... GREAT!!

I am wondering how to share it with people who would be embarassed with Literotica?

H.

so many stories on sites like these are just pure sex. It's rare to find a beautifull work of art.

I've read a lot of sex stories this one to me was the fucking best.

THANK you

Excellent story telling, wonderful leading lady, beautifully described. Whoever said mushy is sexy was right.

this was amazingg

absolutely fucking beautiful

What a beautiful and romantic escape. Can hardly peel myself away from the computer. Please keep writing!

Really deep. Kinda slow but that's the way it should be.

Your description of the love-making and the feelings involved are wonderful and that makes it very erotic. I hope there will be more of this author.