by Hugo_S
Nice premise.
Sex happens a bit too fast.
Needs more dialog while the nipple sucking and cock teasing is going on. Need him to have to tell her what he likes about what's going on. Would he like her handjob to be faster? Slower? Hrder? Softer? Would he like to cum quickly? Or keep being teased, to keep the excitement going?
Four stars.
Love the set up of the story and the detailed descriptions. Looking forward to reading how things develop.
Outstanding! This is one of biggest fantasies! To nurse on lactating tits while we fuck. Yes please
A delightful beginning Take your time but let the story"flow"
Being a tit man, and knowing the enjoyment of sucking milk filled tits, I loved this story. Can't wait for the next installment.
Beautifully written. I wish I could write as wonderfully as you.
Eagerly waiting for part 2.
Always dreamed about doing this. So hot. Thant you, can't wait for more