All Comments on 'Kept'

by KAnneMeinel

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

The "for now" will KEEP us for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Bravo!!

Just beautiful!!!!!

Hurry with part 2 now...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
The End ~ for now

can not wait to see the next intallment of this story....it is well written with passion and desires truly being thoroughly explored...keep up the excellent writing

ReverendCraigReverendCraigalmost 13 years ago
Not bad.

Good start, but it took so long to get rolling, and then BAM! it's over. And an important research point -- in Russia, Sasha is a boy's name, not a girl's. Oops!

dogbreath1961dogbreath1961almost 13 years ago
more

this story is hot i'd like to see where these ladies go. please write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
great story

You definitely need to write more... please. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Beautiful

Loved the story. Nice build up. Cut too short . Please bring a part 2. Will Amy play a part in part 2? I sure hope so!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great

Can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
eh

Wow did you leave us wondering. Great start but the drop off in plot was to quick. Part 2 needs to fix the ending and tie the 3 together.

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 6 years ago
Incredible

This is great reading I am looking forward to the next chapter

Thumper3340Thumper3340almost 6 years ago
Next chapter please

I loved this story !!!!! I hope that you will continue it soon and let us know what Miss Gray is finding in the city of love

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love it!

I love this story! I look forward to more soon!

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