All Comments on 'Kept'

by SilverSparrow

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Scheherazade73Scheherazade73over 11 years ago
I Love This

Very sweet...yet very hot. Well done!

wordJunkiewordJunkieover 11 years ago
Outstanding...

...though a bit confusing...but still very, very arousing! Five stars. Take care and thanks...hcl

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A TRYOUT FOR EACH

to see if cheating will be a habit, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You did not create any interest at all in the characters, so I did not care what they did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very sweet

People always try to make it sound like couples HAVE to try all these different things but if you already have a strong connection... you're one of the lucky ones..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

hell i thought she was trying out to be a hooker til the end and just skimmed to the end

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