All Comments on 'Keri Gone Wild'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice! Looking forward to more chapters

Good start. Keep up the good work. Nice build up with descriptions. Looking forward to more stories/adventures with Keri and her brother.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Pretty good story.

Fairly good buildup. Maybe lost it in a few places. Not really sure where the incest angle was, but I did enjoy the story. Although it needed a better ending to polish off the night. Please keep writing and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not bad for a first try, but...

Why do all the women have to have DD's. Especially after being described as having a compact frame.

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