All Comments on 'Kidnapped'

This sounded just like a Mills and Boon type women's story. Was his torso also bronzed and muscular, his eyes a piercing blue but knowing, caring? All as he ravishes the damsel in distress. Her heated loins grasping for his manhood. Pleaaaase!

I wouldn't say it fits the category but I really like how you write and the story.

It was well written and was just right for a brief escape

Well I liked this story. And I wss tickled that there wss s happy ending for a change. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please write more stories. ZZ

Loved it!

well developed fantasy.

Thanks v

it ended just as it was getting good

That was... sweet? Lol..

So sweet story. You're a great writer. Maybe a second chapter will be good too, specially when they fell in loved.

"LenardSpencer: Really?

This sounded just like a Mills and Boon type women's story. Was his torso also bronzed and muscular, his eyes a piercing blue but knowing, caring? All as he ravishes the damsel in distress. Her heated loins grasping for his manhood. Pleaaaase!"

- OOps, did I write that? Ugh, I might have missed that sentence in my last edit, LOL. Oh well, I like a sappy romance once in a while - although I understand it's not everyone's preference.

"Anonymous: Really good

I wouldn't say it fits the category but I really like how you write and the story."

- True :-) It's not a typical NonCon, but in my experience, the non-con elements in my stories aren't always okay with the readers in the Romance category. So, I turn to this category when I'm in doubt :-)

"Anonymous: Really - yes

It was well written and was just right for a brief escape"

- Thanks and I'm so happy that you liked it :-)

"Anonymous: Well I liked this story. And I wss tickled that there wss s happy ending for a change. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please write more stories. ZZ"

- Haha, thanks :-) And I will definitely write a lot more stories :-) And we can all need a happy ending once in a while, eh?

"Anonymous:❤️

Loved it!

well developed fantasy.

Thanks v"

- Thanks :-) It was actually inspired by Anna Adler called "His hostage", but I didn't agree on how the story turned out so I did my own version :-) Still, I will probably write a longer version of this one day - I have a lot more ideas that I want to try :-)

"Anonymous: perplexed

it ended just as it was getting good"

- That's probably because I try to force myself to write shorter stories in between my longer ones. And this is one of the short "test cases". And that open ending thing was too difficult to resist this time :-)

"MzBea: Awwww..

That was... sweet? Lol.."

- Haha, well, that was what I intended, but I don't always succeed with my intentions :-) And with this story, I'm also experimenting a lot more than usual - it's one of the best things about Literotica - that I can develop ideas and test them. Sometimes they end up with 15 chapters stories and sometimes they don't :-)

"rodav: So sweet

So sweet story. You're a great writer. Maybe a second chapter will be good too, specially when they fell in loved."

- Wow, thanks :-) Well, I always hope to improve my writings and adding a second chapter sound like a brilliant idea! Thank you so much :-)

Up to your usual high standard of writing but for me it seemed too short and thought more could have been made of it. But hey, you're the author and a great one too, and I know I cannot do what you do. 5 stars and a thanks from me.

"Wasn't Sure About This One

Up to your usual high standard of writing but for me it seemed too short and thought more could have been made of it. But hey, you're the author and a great one too, and I know I cannot do what you do. 5 stars and a thanks from me."

- And I heartily agree with you, Ravey19 :-) This was more like an experiment - one of those short stories I need to do in between the long ones - just to keep my sanity, LOL. And I got a great idea on how to expand this one last weekend so I spent the last week writing a whole different ending to it :-)

After reading that you're rewriting this story, decided to trow in my 2 cents.

I alcually love it as it is. It's short and sweet, yes, but the feeling of longing really got to me and I think it was a sweet ending. Maybe it's because I'm a very affectionate person and the idea of being deprived of physical touch for years is inhuman, I cheered when she was finally experiencing it again! Wondering what else you'll add to it!

"Wondering

After reading that you're rewriting this story, decided to trow in my 2 cents.

I alcually love it as it is. It's short and sweet, yes, but the feeling of longing really got to me and I think it was a sweet ending. Maybe it's because I'm a very affectionate person and the idea of being deprived of physical touch for years is inhuman, I cheered when she was finally experiencing it again! Wondering what else you'll add to it!"

- Thank you so much for adding this comment, LunaScarlet :-) I'm delighted that we totally agree on the importance of the longing and the physical touch in this story :-) And you're perfectly right! I want to keep that part of the story, so thank you so much for the reminder :-)

I recently got a question: "What happened afterwards?" And that gave me some ideas that I wanted to explore. Also, I figured it was time to explain who Darren is and why he's getting this assignment - and oops, it's actually turning into a suspense story - and I'm not that kind of writer, well yet, so we'll see how that goes :-) Right now, I'm only lacking a few sex scenes before it's done. Well, I'll probably discover a few plotholes when I start editing, but I like it already, and I'm often my worst critique, LOL.

Your notes at the start describe what the whole world has been going through...and yes, the need for touch IS real! Nicely told tale!

"Prophetic?

Your notes at the start describe what the whole world has been going through...and yes, the need for touch IS real! Nicely told tale!"

- Haha, well, it doesn't work for lottery tickets, that's for sure :-) Just trying to put the world into perspective, I guess :-) And touch is much more important than one should think :-)

I really enjoyed your story BUT why oh why did he have to be a Darren?

In a few weeks she has it all arranged? Even a job, with such a gap in her CV. Even a few months would be short - and with her family and friends she would be happier even if he had not yet shown around.

But overall the story is nice.

Very good read. Thank you.

I loved this! I want more

Wonderful, 10 stars! Too bad she wouldn't get sick to her growing stomach, then tell her new husband Darren, he was going to be a daddy, and he taught her about love the one time their baby was conceived... Life isn't always about money and"status"... Please write a continuation of this story...

Thanks for all the kind words :-) And yes, I have already written a longer version of this story with the title "Taken". Just check my Bio page or homepage for links to all the major sites where I publish my books - well, with the exception of a certain site that has recently terminated my account because of the dubcon content.

Great love story thank you for writing this and sharing with us.

I loved the story. It made me want to watch life of crime with Jennifer Aniston. You are a very good writer.