All Comments on 'Killer Dreams Ch. 06-10'

Please don't make it a MPDS tale

Very good again,

I'm loving this story and can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Didn't feel much plot progression in this chapter. The Twin Cities locale has me hooked though. Love Castle Danger Cream Ale...

This is good.

I really like your storytelling... the multiple perspectives are giving us pieces of the puzzle but the final picture is still unclear, which I love. Clear and well-developed characters keep my interest and wondering how they will fit in at the end of the story. Looking forward to future chapters.

Maybe if the racist cops stopped shooting us down unarmed there wouldn't be such a trust problem... Oh wait... That's right... The real problem is the lefty liberals...