All Comments on 'Kim and Eva Ch. 01'

The most beautiful, sensual story ever. I was hard for 6 pages without cumming. I can hardly believe it. That was wonderful. Thank you.

This was so well written and HOT. Definitely will read again, and definitely looking forward to more! Thank you for sharing!

I don't normally comment on stories... but damn that was good. Takes me back to a fun time I had with an older woman one weekend.

that was an amazing story! I love it, cant wait to see more of these two if you write more =D

much love

please continue.

absolutely breath taking!! can't wait to see how the story continues.

This was an Awsome story, can't wait to read more from you.

Please ... continue. :) ~ L

Well and beautifully written. You should be very proud of what you just accompanished. I look forward to your future works with eager anticipation. Thanks for sharing your great talent. Christie P

Well done, looking forward to more episodes.

The quality of your writing, the wonderful storyline, the realistic characters, and the pictures you draw with words, all combine to make you my favourite writer. I'm so glad I found you :)

That was amazing!!! You're an amazing writer and I can't wait for you to write more installments. One of the hottest things i've ever read.

That was a great story. I'm no expert but it was beautifully constructed and vividly descriptive. The sex scenes were hot and believable too - which is alway a bonus. I'm looking forward to reading a lot more of your work.

Kindest Regards,

Ricky

This was awesomely written... I had a lot of fun in the shower this morning and I hadn't even finished the story until now too bad I am at work and cannot continue the fun. Please write more you are very talented.

Just a litle question. Will be a second, third or more parts to follow?

Please, prety please do.

Thankyou.

kim and eva ch 1 . after reading this very erotic hot story . i am wanting more .

of you awesome stories to read , so do say theres more in the pipe line . do keep them cumming lol

omigoood!!! omiigggooodd!! please please please have more SOON!! this is only day 1.. what happen to day 2 / 3 / 4?? u must have Ch. 02!! :)

That was a great story, definitely one of my favourites. Please keep writing this series.

like the build up,very satisfying sex scenes,not cloying on the romance,just about perfect,wish I could write like this

I love this!!!!!!! It was great!!! Please tell me there is more?!

Loved the writing style, the progressive plot buildup, everything! How far that you wish to take this tale is up to you, but DO keep on writing along the same theme - you have wonderful talent!

I love this story and keep checking for updates. Hope we'll see some more chapters on these two fab ladies.

I love it. This is one of my favorites. I hope you finish it.

I am in love with this story, I've read it at least twice now and I fall in love with it over and over again. But I want more! More Kim and Eva please! It's a very strong request from a diehard fan.

I so hoped there was a second chapter by the time I got to end. I loved this though. Stories like this is why I read on this site.

Please add another chapter.

You can't leave it like that, please!!

This was the perfect sensual story!

This is an amazing story... now for the rest of it!

Loved it ,looking for more from you

I'm loving this. The way the characters developed has been so natural, with all the eventual tensions that accepting ones sexuality can bring for one, other or both partners. Didn't notice that in reality it was quite a long first chapter. That for me is always a measure of how good it is. And the descriptions of their erotic encounter were particularly good. The test for me being a I read every word and didn't skip as i often do when it's overdone. Thanks and looking forward to reading Ch 2.

Most comments have been express by others. All I can say is thanks and wish there was more.