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All Comments on 'Kim and Klark Ch. 01'

by JackofallOrbits

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Sirspet0619Sirspet0619about 5 years ago
Very nice

Easy to read and liked the flow. I'm hoping it's gets a little hot and heavy. Will like to see how they grow together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Not bad for 1st effort....

Chapter 2 needs to let Kim and Klark progress, and move to 2nd Base!! LOL

More POV from Kim would help too....slow and easy is a different but still refreshing way to start....keep up the short, descriptive prose!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
sweet and wonderful

reminded me of my first, made me so wet!

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