All Comments on 'Kim and Ron'

it feels like u tryed to rush it that u where in to much of a rush to make this a really great story, the plot was good but as i said it was rush. put more thought into it ok. u a good story in the makeing here. and start draken shot them with the laser. just an idea.

your story sucked. the idea is great, but you just went too damn fast. just slow down and go into more detail and i know your talent will show.

great start to this story i want more .

WTF...?

Very poorly written. You don't know how to spell,, you don't know the difference between the words "know and now or then and than", poor grammer and punctuation.