All Comments on 'Kim Comes to Stay'

by rwcforfun

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chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
Nice Read***

Thanks for sharing.

seacoastcoupleseacoastcouplealmost 5 years ago
Summer fantasy fun!

I enjoyed this short little post. Who doesn’t want a guest cottage in the back yard with a cute summer guest? Thanks for sharing this sexy post. :)

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204almost 5 years ago
Welcome to Lit

Love your stories, both of them, hope you have many, many more to offer. Yes, I'd love to read all about Kim's escapades in the summer house, whether she invites girlfriends over to share all her benefits or merely tries to keep them mostly to herself. Maybe she'll invite her landlord to join her for a picnic, a ball game in the park, or a weekend road trip, the possibilities are endless.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs.....

The main character seemed totally obnoxious. I stopped reading because I didn’t give a hoot what happened to him.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 4 years ago
Made me smile

This did make me smile, just a short wank read for young boys.

I,m sure you can write some good stuff, make it longer and with deeper characters and plot.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Begs some explanation of why she’s not a clueless airhead anymore and why she suddenly wants to screw him.

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