All Comments on 'Kim's New Life Ch. 21'

Whilst I have loved the story so far, and your attention to detail is normally spot on, I was very surprised that you seemed to have glossed over Kim's first day at work whilst under Kelly's control. There was no mention of the fact that Kim had met with Sandra,and they had talked, and I am sure that Kim should have confessed that to Kelly. Also the chat she had with the CEO, and being offered a temporary CEO role in name only.But hey these are minor points which I believe are all part of the plot including why Kim was blindfolded when she met the president of the society. Please keep writing. Yet if Kim is as perceptive as we are led to believe surely she will recognise the voice at some stage.

Rgds Al

Yes, it does appear as though I glossed over those areas. It seems like Kim still has a lot to learn about sharing important things with her Mistress. She has been too independent too long.

Thanks for sharing your comments.

Jan

it does get a bit repededetive, but you do keep it exciting.

You keep up the suspense and the journey continues.