by JanetMon
great writing
wish you could get Rebecca that silkstockinglover uses to illustrate and bring this to life
with your vivid descriptions it is almost like the reader is in the same room
You took me by surprise again, not the twists and turns I was expecting, as I thought Barb was a Dom, which was why she was acting cold towards Kim, as she realised Kim was taken. But it turns out that she was just very naive and was trying to put on a bold front. Glad they worked it out together in the end. It almost feels that Barb could be pushed into a submissive role. but hey that would really complicate the story plot. But hey please just keep writing, and taking the story in your own direction, as I I always really look forward to the next chapter, to see what happens next, as does my partner. Rgds Al
I’ve been reading pretty much nonstop since last night. Great series, great pacing! I’m technically not in the scene, so the points others made didn’t offend me. (One tiny thing: it’s “ensure” not “insure”) I just wish this scene with Barb was longer than four sentences. I will now promptly move on to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!
You handled what could have been a difficult scene with your usual superb skill.