All Comments on 'Kim's Open Door'

Good story

Nice beginning if you decide to make this a multipart story. I now you said third person isn't your usual. So I'll said you did well I only saw once where you used the wrong pronoun. (me instead of him) Just be mindful of that and keep the story going. Thanks for sharing.

Lol this was good needs a part 2 at least

you've lost none of your writing skill by changing to 3rd person.

part 2 please.

Great start now keep it going. This has the potential to be a great multiple part story. I would keep future parts no less than 2 pages but hopefully more.

Simpld story that made my hangjob easy. Thumbs up PHAT

Enjoyed this story and I hope you decide to write at least one sequel to it.

Did Brian knock his sister up since she wasn't on birth control and he shot his load in her?????

please continue there is room for a few more chapters. great job.

The first of yours I have read. I liked it. Enough that I will go to read more of yours. Well done.

Very hot and romantic

The dude needs to make changes in his life, start with physically taking better care of himself. There is an expectation to not be a slob. doesn't require spending hours in the gym. Heck 8,000 walking steps a day and eating a balanced lower calorie diet is not over taxing and he could lose 30 to 40 pounds in a year and maintain it without too much effort. Don't have to be an athlete. Work on social skills and pursue a self intentional education direction to be successful.

So it didn't work out with the one friend who didn't want a relationship. Not all relationships are meant to be marriage material.

It is a fake story. Shut the fuck up