All Comments on 'King Size Bed'

The only unsexy thing about this story was him blowing his load prematurely almost every time he was in someone becasuse he was getting overexcited like some 16 yerar old boy.

Wonderful story, well written

Really hot. Thank you!! Loved every moment!

Very hot; sizzling. Could easily been continued in follow-on stories. MC and Megan could have bought a king size bed for home and invited Lisa and Tim over (maybe while MC was out of town). Tim may have been okay with "cheating" as Lisa said she had been with a woman before. A little confusing here and there; was this a weekend trip or a week long trip? Was surprised it took so long for one women to be cleaning out the other woman after the MC orgasmed inside. In the end, love prevails and everyone lived happily ever after. Great Story.

Wonderful story

While somewhat hot, don't approve of cheating, which should be a tag here, Tim deserves better than that, sometimes work be like that in a marriage, no excuse to cheat.

Superbly written with a developing plot line that kept me enthralled the whole way through. The hottest thing I've ever read on Lit.

Super hot, super believable work up to the three person interactions... Poor Tim -- off on business and forgotten.

You did exceptionally well at bringing these three to life . I felt like a voyeur in their hotel room!

Just as good reading this the second time around!

Pretty intense. Well written 5

Every time I read this story I imagine that it’s my husband, his ex-wife and me. She once propositioned me before he and I stared dating, so she is my frequent fantasy.

wow…prolonged pleasure….M/F, F/M,F/F…and on and on.

Never letting up after the preliminaries.. Riveting exciting sex all round!

What a miraculous weekend….the supreme sexual highlight in anyone’s fantasy.

….count me in for more of that!

Thanks for the pleasure you gave me!

Beejay3

I’m wondering why Lisa’s boyfriend, Tim, was in this story at all. Another pretext could easily been invented for the three of them to be on vacation together and stuck in one room with one bed. At the end it certainly seems like the three way sex will continue in the future and Tim was not a close friend to Megan and whatshisname making me think he will not be added as a fourth. Seems uncomfortable.

Quite possibly the best FFM (FMF?) (MFF?) story on literotica.com!

I have read this before, and while the paragraphs could have been smaller, this is an exciting read.

Had me hard and beyond

Yarnspinnerr ;->

Great story! Well written which doesn’t always happen and erotic.

Megan discovered her inner domme. Though Megan was the larger woman, she took the top position 3 times with Lisa, and voiced her happiness when Gary said he was fine with Lisa and Megan doing it more often.

Great story, keep posting more please

Chapter 2: Lisa tells Tim what happened, they all get together for a foursome at a cabin in the woods.

Beautifully written...wonderful story line.

Easy to envision the love between friends and the sexual connections.

Absolutely beautiful. I can't think of anything more sexy and loving than what happened. Granted, it was over the top, but man o man, was it hot. The great part for me was the loving relationship between husband and wife. Thanks for sharing with us.

Tim's call in to work was his other wife, reason he goes away to work so much. Lisa figured it out with the cancelled reservation. Frustrated and jumps at the idea of a fun week with those who care for her. Lots of hot sexy fun.

Taking fantasy to the limit. Great sex, more sex and more sex. The setup is ridiculous, but who cares, let's have more sex. Luckily the guy has a cock that never stops. Great fantasy, nice job.

Yeah, some questions around consent from Tim - but this is one of the very hottest stories I've read here, and I've read thousands. Absolutely top-tier. Please write more!

Neither of them ever asked Lisa about Tim. It makes a huge difference if Lisa is cheating on Tim, or if she and Tim have agreed that Lisa can have sex with others. And why did Lisa never call Tim and tell him what was happening? Did Tim cancel the reservation and not tell Lisa? A most unrealistic story.

Fabulous story with the erotic experience of sharing of the three characters feelings and excitement of becoming closer together to share sexual pleasures. Well done

Whew! I'm exhausted just reading about all the sex these three.shared. Super hot. Great dialog, especially the feelings expressed by each one. Great writing. 5-😊😊😊😊😊

Lisa never mentioned her husband. That is only credible if they have already agreed that Tim can enjoy sex with others if he is out on his long trips; a very sensible arrangement that allows love an marriage to be sustained without putting impossible demands on healthy partners withh high sex drive. This is a beautiful example of living that sex and love can exist together. Not everyone can manage such emotions, but it would be good for us all if it were accepted more widely..

Nicely written, and just so much fun reading a longish story thoroughly soaked in sex throughout. No worries that some of his performance is a thing of fantasy!

A great story. If the average man could do it as much in two weeks as this guy did it in mere hours, that would be impressive.

Thanks!! Five Stars

So what about Tim? No consequences there for Lisa? Hmmmm?!

i mean its good but how many nuts is this dude gonna fucking bust

Not the kind of story I usually read, but I liked it all the same. Very, very hot. Thanks for writing!

Wow what a story , i was there all the way start to finish . My only regret is my wife would never do what these 3 have done .

More please. 😊

I came home early from a dart league in Ohio due to the snow... I walked in on my wife and her girlfriend sharing some good sex.. They invited me to the bed and while the girlfriend was going down on my wife's clit I buried my dick in the girl friend from behind. I learned they were both bi ... we had many good experiences before we were transferred out of state. .. your story was outstanding.. I would have given you 10 stars if possible.. Thanks for waking up some memories....

This has to be one of the most realistic and sexy stories I have ever read! Thank you for writing this piece of erotic art!

First time to read on this site. This story is the most sexual, exciting, loving and sharing that I have ever read. Made me think...hell, KNOW...that I would love to be involved in a triangle. The fact that Meagan became willing to experiment and then to let her fantasizes have their way with both her hubby and Lisa was great. Sat here in just the way you would imagine....hhaaarrrddddd...

Thanks for the story. On to the next one!

My best friend is my husband's ex. I shared this story with her a while back. Then we planned a surprise trip for him this weekend. We made an excuse for us to ride in the back seat while sharing a blanket as he did the driving. She and I were so wet when we got to the hotel that we were rubbing off on each other's sopping pussies by the time he got into the room. When we saw him watching, it just made each of us even hornier. Must have done something for him too: He started stroking his dick and moved closer and closer to us... I'll have to finish this little story later. I can hear them fucking and I can't wait any longer to join them in our own king size bed.

The happy ever after ending of these three falling deeper in love has one very big obstacle... the absent husband, whose appearance may seem like a monster movie sequel. In the beginning of the sequel to this piece, perhaps Lisa could reveal that the vacation was supposed to be their reconnection in an open marriage, but in the last analysis, it was just the dick saying 'I think we should start seeing other people'. There could be three celebrations in the sequel. The first is a clean bill of health for all from STDs, thanks in part to Lisa never getting any from the dick ex for months. The second celebration is Lisa moving in The third celebration could be the courts declaring the prenup valid and Lisa walking away with the fortune she brought into the marriage.

One factor of these stories I appreciate is plausibility. This one didn't require the suspension of belief that is often required. I felt that this could happen, just not to me

Wish movies were made like this , it great story line and live not sex

this was one of the best stories i have ever read. it was writen to show how three people main interest was to please each other . they made love to each other . loved the little things, like her rubbing him on her and helping to put in in, laying her head next to them having sex up close, him eating their combined love jucies,

I would love for you to write a story about two couples who become close friends and feel and do the same as this story. have same sex parts in the story,but not written that they are gay,only want to please all in a foursome. no ass fucking. maybe swapping creampies. as much sex with all four together verses couple couple

This is by far my favorite read. I've fantasized about almost all of the sex between these three characters. Only one was left out... maybe next time. Thank you

all of the events were not only possible but very likely to happen.

Enjoyed the story very much! Written well, and enjoyed how it progressed.

I would also love to hear more from these characters GREAT story.

I'm absolutely sure that women enjoy sharing other women and seeing them get into it as much as men do ... and they go further when in a situation like this

That`s the way it ought to be every time, for everybody, the first time and forever after.

Imagine what people would be like. Wow! My COMPLIMENTS! And a lot of Bravos.

Loved how the story and intensity built up gradually. Really felt that all three characters got so much out of the experience. Excellent story and well written.

This was a great story, but it begs a continuation. What happens when they get home? Does the liaison continue? What is going to happen when Lisa's husband learns of their liaison, no mention has been made of him except at the beginning of the story?

Great story, one of the best. I would like to see more. :)

A great story, I first read it somewhere else (a long winded explanation) but it is the story that introduced me to Literotica.

I love the fact that your descriptions are vague, It basically allows the reader to create their own images with just a few details. I was imagining a few people from my past.

Your story is well written compared to many I have read on Literotica. It makes for easy reading. A badly written story is much a turn off as a woman with hairy armpits.

Great work, keep writing.

I enjoyed this story. It's is lengthy in it's explanations, The scenes need more detail.But it was a good story .

good but too lengthy.no vivid descripton of nipples of megan and lisa

That was very well written. Very hot, plus the good grammar added to the reasons why I enjoyed this story. It sounds silly, but the way this story was written helps it excell over other three way stories out there. Thank you! Definitely enjoyed!

Reads as good as it did the first time - thank you

The best that I've read for a very long time. Keep writing like this, please!

One of the very best.

11 totally agree with all positive comments

The way you portrayed the male was superb. He acted as a loved and caring man that respected and truly loved the women involved in his fantasy.Thank you for sharing.

Would be happy if we can have video of two really good looking models with a handsome guy based exactly on this theme.

That was absolutely amazing. i love how lone you made the story, and just the entire thing was... WOW. JUST. WOW. loved it!

I've always loved this story, leaves me highly aroused every time!

I have no words for how good this story is! Such a great story throughout, and I loved the ending!! I need to read this again sometime!

This is a 100% Smoking Hot story.

Loved reading and jacking off to it.

WONDERFUL

That is one of the best stories I have ever read. It had my cock hard the whole way through, and now there is only one thing that will do, as soon as I've pressed the submit button I've got to take myself in hand and masturbate. It will be one of the best cums I've had in ages.9B43

Wow, just wow! This is the most erotic, sexy ad lovely thing I've ever read/seen! I was soaked and grinding in bed from page one. Took me about 1-1,5h to read it to the end before I could finally take a shower and finish myself off! :p Big big thanks for sharing this wonderful story! I'm saving this for the future ;)

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot!!!

This was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Probably because it's every man famtasy. I did have such a threesome one weekend in Santa Barbara, but not without some conflict. It just wasn't as smooth as the characters in this story. Probably what made it so good to read.

This was a great story...loved it..kept me wanting to read more

Literally the best I have ever read! Is it fiction or non-fiction?

Absolutely loved it. Perectly written and flowed continuously and every scene was as plausible as real life. And it was very lovely the way there was sharing so selflessly. I loved this story. Best I've ever read on Literotica!

very exciting story to read

LOVED EVERY WORD OF IT!!

Let's see a part 2!

Excellent Story, would like to see a part 2 about life when they get home.

Great story! Big fantasy trip for most men. I know it was for me. Wow. More please!

Very well written, the author took me along with him through the story. The descriptions were so good that I felt that I could see everything that was happening. Well done!

Leaves nothing unturned, everything for everyone's fantasy!

love how you layed it all out and thought about each detail including how we last longer after and yes, have trouble getting up after multiple times even with th best view in front of us, and you kept his amounts to realistic levels for a high use adult. It all Felts so real like i was the hidden camera watching it all with every detail and sound

Very well done ... You hit on several of my biggest fantasies. This is one of my all-time favorites.

You expressed the love between them perfectly! Megan sounds like a girl ready for adventure! I loved how well you thought everything through, the characters, then scene, the backstory! Awesome job!

(though now I may have to change my panties :P)

Oh if only my girl would do that.

... your time in developing the situation. I appreciated that.

There may have been some cliches, but overall the story was very enjoyable and realistic. Well ... besides the countless hardons of course. Even two girls don't have that effect over a timespan like this. ;-)

Anyway ... Thanks a lot.

loved the way the story progressed, very sexy with great detail. hope you have more stories. I am going to check right now. Thanks

that was amazing.

Too good to be true! How could a guy recover so quickly after a wopping explosion? However, it fulfilled its purpose, and this reader joined others in having a raving hard cock. I also had a full supply of thick, slippery saliva, which I made good use of on my cock, if you know what I mean. Good writing, even if it was exaggerated.

An incredibly erotic story ... a threesome marathon lasting an entire weekend ... brought back wonderful memories of when my partner and I would have weekend hotel marathons ... me coming 4 or 5 times a day, and her losing count ... I loved the sensuous nature of the sex and care the characters felt for one another ... they were believable and you identified with them ... overall a fantastic story!

excelent reading. This was my first novel of this type.

I could really get into the story! Thank you :)

Loved every second of it. Wow

Great read, great characters and great sex, described well with a fair amount of thought gone into the writing of this, really good read, made me want to get into bed with either or both of these characters.......

Believable storyline with believable characters make for a perfect storm. I enjoyed how the characters interacted both in and out of sexual situations. It was a beautiful ending to have Gary and Megan return to their old life and it would be interesting to hear what would happen after they returned home. I imagine they'd have a pretty good time.

for everything. This is my first time reading Erotica, I had skipped through some of the other posts and they made me feel a little out of place. Yours was not only enticing but very descriptic, emotional and intense. I am re-discovering my sexuality and the thought of having a threesome has entered my mind, this was the exact depiction of how I want it to be. As a writer to another writer I am impressed and will be looking for more of your work. Thank you.

There are fantasies and there are fantasies. This is all of them (at least for me) rolled into one. Well written. The build up is exemplary. And, oh, the climax (es). They are stellar. thank you. The characters are honest. They have recognized both their needs and their opportunities. I look for stories written by women, but strickland83, you have made my day. thank you.

This story was so hot and positively plausible. We had a wicked hot threesome with my wife and my best friend and we're now planning our next threesome and seeking an ideal friend like Lisa. I enjoyed this story as I believe Gary's perspective was very much like my own - utmost respect and love for his wife who continually sought his wife's approval...and got it along the way. Gary and Megan have a strong relationship and the fact that Lisa was included strengthened the bond. This is what my wife and I are working towards and I'm definitely going to share this story with her!

Great erotic story line, and well-written.

very well teased and lovely story for teasers

Someone complained that the man didn't just jump the ladies, but the story is about first crossing boundaries, not absolut the highly experienced. I thought it rather hot and also rather convincing, in the context of the genre at least.

It was good. In retrospect there were a lot of things a little unrealistic such as the constant pausing to ask for 'permission'. Any hot blooded heterosexual male woulda jumped on the female friend the moment the wife said she was down with it.

That being said, I can fire off more loads than Gary without tryin'. =P

Amazing, well done.