All Comments on 'King Thakkorias'

Really loved your story. I enjoyed your characters quite a bit. Your descriptions are fantastic. The story moved right along, you did a good job of letting us see into King Thak's character with his merciless judgement. Good transitions into scenes without feeling rushed. There were a few out-of-date references. (the one that comes to mind is the use of measurement in "inches" in our ancient setting), but that's pretty picky stuff. I'm a fan. Keep up the good work.

Love the way you pay attention to a woman's orgasm. Thanks for the afternoon delight.

This is a wonderful story Dark, so well written. Wow. I'm going to have to rethink my whole position on fantasy/sci fi. And then there's that whole attention to detail on pleasuring a woman. That's going to stick with me all day. Phew!

This is fantastic! The shaving was a good touch as well. Stubble burn is not sexy. Luckily, this story is.