All Comments on 'Kink Pt. 03'

It’s an interesting start to the story, and whilst the chapters appear short on Lit it’s unlikely to matter to readers if you can submit regular additions. I couldn’t pin down a rough geographical location for the storage setting, unless I just missed something obvious.

The way things stand at present I sort of envisaged Suki ending up with Theo and her friend with Dillon, that sounds like an awful lot of angst ahead.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)

Looking forward to the next chapters! 🙂

This is my first story on here and I am unfamiliar with what chapter length is acceptable. But the book is finished and regular updates are on the way.

Im curious as to why you see that pairing taking place? But you are right, there is a fair chunk of angst - as well as depravity - on the horizon.

Just keep them being themselves...and developing their stories.

So far...So good!

I'm thinking the Title is wrong...so far.