All Comments on 'Kinky Marriage'

You never let us down!

Great story with a wonderful ending. Well except for Uncle Joe dying, but at least he left them everything.

Great story, the blind aspect was actually a first in my experience. Nice touch and it gives it a air of believably. An older man being cared for by two friends and being able to hide from him seeing how they submit to satisfying him. Love the weakening and manipulation as he gets her addicted to taking bigger dicks. Feeling then sucking it, sneaking to lick the cum up after he finishes.

That is a beautiful story, Hot and with heart! Loved it x

WOW I just love your stories so so much thank you😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I'm not into M/M action, but you did such a non-threatening presentation that I read the story through instead of just punching out. You are one of the VERY BEST on this sight.

Cordially,

Paul

Well almost. You started out being somewhat serious. But then you predictably went with the tried and true pattern. Guy in this case, but sometimes a girl, starts planting seeds. Then the inevitable fall, though I was impressed this time it took weeks and not a day or two. And no pins or alliteration! Yes! Very nice! Then the, cant have a dialogue without them, "slut, on your knees, cocksucker, cum dump", began. I'm sure there are people who do that, but even in devious seductions, this cant be very common. Still, you almost pulled it off, so I'm pleasantly surprised and thankful. There are those authors I mentioned last story, if you wish to check them out.

Actually, you want a challenge, if you're up to it? Now this is just me. But I've always loved coming of age stories. Particularly with a harem type storyline. Think Nick Scipio's Summer Camp, JoeJ's Twice Lucky, Bluedragon's An Ordinary Sex Life, and Dark1's Rich Kid/Rich Guy. But I'd love to read one with a female POV. I've seen both men and women authors say it can only be written by a woman, and both say a man could write it. I dont know which is true. Of course because of age limits, you would probably have to do a Story Online. Maybe you could write it a little at a time, so not to interfere with your regular posts. We could then see how serious you could be.

And if I keep commenting, since were talking about serious plots, I'll just go by Sirius. So...

Sirius

I really loved their journey but then the end was so rushed :/ I was excited to hear Charlie get seduced into anal and their first threesome scene

I loved the story and gave it five stars and a favorite point, but, to be honest, I scrolled past the guy/guy stuff. Just not my thing. Sorry.

Great story with a wonderful trio...where can I find such a terrific setup?

Silky yet again you bring your A game to Erotica. Loved this story..

Another fantastic story from my favorite writer. You are incredible. This one would have been great illustrated especially the part of Charlie in lingerie getting it in the ass. I can’t wait until your next one. xoxoxox

Fantastic story and very erotic. Gave it 5 stars. One somewhat unbelievable part for me was the necessity for big Joe to have someone bath him. He’s only blind. Pretty sure he could still feel around for a bar of soap. But, I can see how you need the bath tub as a way for her to first see BIG Joe and begin the descent.

WOW! Loved it. Love the way your dialog adds to the feel of the story. Your writing is very inspiring ... to a neophyte.

Really great work love most of your work

Big Joe is for me. Great writing as always. Thanks Jasmine you get the mind going.

Fantastic story! We need an Uncle Joe in our lives!!

Loved, loved, loved this story!! I’d gladly suck Uncle Joe’s big cock until he shot his load in my mouth and I’d love to watch him hammer my wife’s pussy too!

well layed out story, so fun to read and imagine. thanks again

I loved it. Well done. Five stars. I wish I could find my own Maxine and Charlie. I'm up for everything Joe, Maxine, and Charlie did - and more. I'd want to be a bottom and cocksucker for Charlie too. Equal and sharing. Share a BJ for Charlie with Maxine, etc. One of your best, Jasmine.

And I had not read this before the last time I sent a private message to you.

Great story and I think this genre has more potential. Maybe next time her mother can get involved and the humiliation of the husband being exposed can add some spice. Always on the look-out for your next piece of work.

Thanks

AWESOME Story!!!!!

Nice story. 5 stars.

A wonderful story. Had excited the whole read. Couldn’t stop reading

Once again, an exciting and very hot tale. Love your writing!!!

wow yet another wonderful story

Wonderful story

Great story, as always.

So very hot, you make me wetter than a bitch in heat

Liked it. Quite a good story.

Quite well done and I suspect a very typical progression from cuckoldry by us lesser-endowed men. Though in our case it really wasn’t a manipulation by our third, rather an erotic curiosity spawned in me from watching my wife and her partner. It took quite a while before the idea of me giving him oral slipped out during our fantasy play and I was shocked at how turned on my wife got once I mentioned it. Even longer before she brought it up to our third and got enthusiastic response. It’s now a periodic part of our play. Again.....but for the manipulation by Joe this is a very real story and earns a hearty 5 boners

I absolutely love this story! The build up, the characters, uncle Joe’s big fat cock. Sad to see uncle Joe pass, but what a hot sexy experience they all had!!

❤️❤️❤️

A bit of an oddball premise but then again I'm straight.

DT

I loved it. Wasn’t sure if it was for me... but I could not stop reading! You have a very special talent! Thanks for giving these sexy stories!💜

Amazing!! You are my favorite author here.

Wild! I had girlfriend named Maxine so it brought some sexually exciting memories (without the male on male). The story is amazing. The whole big cock experienced lover d fascinating. The characters are intriguing and somewhat believable. Well done.

Best story I have read in a long long time. Write another with more 3 way action and maybe add some more men!!!

Wrong category. Should be in Gay

Hot story

294. Good story. Uncle Joe was a sly guyand was rewarded for being well endowed.

You are absolutely my favorite author on here. Keep up the good work.

Great story and writing style. I loved to aspect of a friendly neighbor slowly corrupting a sweet young couple for his pleasure. I didn’t enjoy the direction you took Charlie. Eating cream pies is alway an excellent activity for any man. Having a threesome with a little M on M would have been ok however turning him into a sissy gay guy with Joe was not warranted.

A delightful insight into a decidedly kinky marriage.

Should've been titled "The slut and the cocksucker", since that's all the dilogue ended up becoming. Jesus christ...